Life , like the tide of a sea
Tickle your feet ; the raptures entice you and me . .
Before you it recedes atlast , inspite of your plea
Drenched in effervescence , for long remain thee .
Life , like the tide of a sea
Taunt us with gory , you never expect such from thee.
You wriggle from its clutch , you , but never ever me ;
Relieved to have survived , though its a pity you did flee .
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-soon to be part of an anthology-
Beautifully written DR…
Never ever give up their MESSAGE
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thanks deepak 🙂
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Enjoyed your write….Thanks for sharing
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🙂
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lovely lines……..very expressive 🙂
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thank you . . 🙂
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Thought provoking and deep. You have your way with words. 🙂
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thanks a lot raj for the comment 🙂 have a good day 🙂
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Nice poem – Liked the metaphor of sea for life. Though not a new one, I liked the way you have brought your comparisons creatively and stuck to the theme without ranting.
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appreciate you stopping by to comment . . have a good day 🙂
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thanks for sharing the sole remarkable key. Hope we are able to open the door…
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you will be 🙂 have a great day !
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Beautiful words Maliny jhi :).
A perfect picture to go with these beautiful lines :).
Very well expressed.
Just loved it :).
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thanks a lot for dropping by pooja 🙂
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Powerful Words!!! loved it…Will be coming back for more..
thanks for visiting http://nishdil.blogspot.in/ and leaving your valuable comments for me… Hope to see you often there 🙂
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you have a beautiful blog . . wl make it sure that i visit yours often. . thanks for dropping by 🙂
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A exhilarating poem.
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thanx arun 🙂
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beautiful writing 🙂
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Beautiful poem. I always want to write something in which I can repeat the first line but I fail miserably. This work is remarkable. Sorry for a late reply, hurt my right hand badly.
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Beautiful words. Nice post.
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Nice poem and good thoughts….
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