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Strangers , they unite
In dim lit room – unreined
Lovers for one night .
Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Challenge . The prompt – Strangers .
Strangers – Haiku
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Wow … what a lovestory caught in a few words and lines.
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oOOoo 😉 I like that they're unreined!
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Oooh yes that's a story.
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I like unreined – is that one step before, or after, unbridled 🙂
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Thankyou Kristjaan . .
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Thanks chhavi ! i used the word unreined to denote the unruly nature of the practice . .
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Good selection of words, A good Haiku.
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Thankyou kumar 🙂
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Powerful tale of lust and (probably) love !!!
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Rightly put Amrit 🙂
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A story in few words..This is the charm of haiku,and you kept that charm intact..
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Beautifully captured the transient nature of life…
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Reblogged this on Chasing Passions and commented:
I decided to highlight today’s ‘Saturday Specifics’ with a ‘Throwback’ gesture. I love Haiku, although I rarely write one these days. I used to craft poems before and I plan to acknowledge my lost spirit through this post I reblog.
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Haiku is a genre which has been experimented with in so infinitely innovative ways that it is difficult to comment on the format. I;d rather go with the content here wherein you have composed an epoch in brevity. Kudos!!
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