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Sun shines down
On snow perched sprout –
Blooming life.
Blooming life –
As damp tracks languish
Beneath floral mat.
Written for Carpe Diem.
End Of Snow – Haiku
Sun shines down
On snow perched sprout –
Blooming life.
I hope no one treads on those snowdrops!
Lovely haiku, thank you for sharing 🙂
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Love the first one especially-nicely done!
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Life in a few words.. nice! 🙂
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Blooming life … this had a fresh hope in it !!!
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aloha Maliny. i like the idea of a “floral mat”. that has a lot of possibilities to me. especially juxtaposed with something like a “blanket of snow”. very cool moments you are going after here. aloha.
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Maliny this haiku is superb. The first three lines are fantastic. They are so optimistic !!
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nicely done
these seems like classical haiku
Cheers!
JzB
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you conveyed the sneaky arrival well 🙂
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Nice…
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yes 🙂 Thank you for the comment ! 🙂
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Thankyou 🙂
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Hey thanks Pradyumna 🙂
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Thanks Amrit 🙂
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Thank you so much for the visit and for leaving behind such a good opinion Rick . Do keep visiting 🙂
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Thank you Usha mam 🙂
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Thank you ! Coming from you that sounds special 🙂
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Thank you !
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Thanks Krishna . . 🙂
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great take of the prompt! and the picture of that snowdrops is perfect for your beautiful words.
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lovely image and superb lines to go with the, esp “floral mat” creates a lovely image…
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Thank you Adriana !
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Thankyou Reshma 🙂
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