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1.
Little girl cries
As parents fight loud –
Insignificant pain.
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2.
Cluttering bangles
On soft dainty arms –
Uncharted symphony.
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3.
Poignant rants
For once he lay
Deaf to her pain.
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P.S : I haven’t focussed on the prompt per se, rather wrote sets of haiku inspired by the theme. I hope that is allowed. Thank you all for the comments 🙂
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Its beautiful 🙂
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Exquisitely written! I love the tenderness of the second one. The other two made me a bit sad. But that is the power of your composition 🙂
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Well..you have done well with treating a difficult prompt….enjoyed your interpretation and your haiku..and visiting here.. RS:)
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I like all three but I like the second the best. “uncharted symphony” is romantic and wistful sounding to me.
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Looks nice…. I'm not deeply familiar with a haiku'c concept, but it's pretty challenging all the same.
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I love the new look 🙂
And the Haikus… Yours are always splendid. A pleasure to read. Keep it up. 🙂
XX
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quiet cacophonies of the heart
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This is poignant … the first one really touched my heart !!!
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wow. three great ones. The first one– you captured the pain and noise so well.
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Wow, the Uncharted symphony stuff is pretty deep!
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just can't put eyes away from it 🙂 lovely one Maliny 🙂
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beautiful
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Thank you Rupertt 🙂
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Thanks Mixi ! 🙂
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Thank you Ramesh ji ! I am a fan of your haiku and that makes this comment special 🙂
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Thank you for appreciating the haiku even then Ritesh 🙂
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Hey thanks Ankita ! Returning the hugs 🙂
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True 🙂
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Thank you Amrit 🙂
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Thank you for the words and for the visit 🙂
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Glad that you found so 🙂
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Hey thanks Saurabh . keep visiting then 🙂
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Thanks Ali 🙂
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I read it at least 10 times before I realized I have to comment here to let you know how great it was. *takes a bow* it paints a stunning image, emanates an 'uncharted symphony' and yes, the pain and cacophony arrest the reader. amazing. i cannot stop, but i should! *takes a bow again* Keep writing!!!!
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loved the set, but my first one is so, so powerful and expressive!
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The first one hurt me – good work
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That is an overwhelming comment Sankara ! Thank you for those good words and i am humbled and honoured all at once 🙂
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Thank you Adriana 🙂
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Thanks a lot Sam and welcome to my blog 🙂
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First and third are really moving. Second one comes as a relief. Very impressive.
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Wonderful set Maliny!! The pain and ache in the first and last Haiku are deafening… The bangle symphony is musical:)
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WOW. I love the way haiku work. The pain is so evident here and the images they create – each one of them – is vivid. Thank you for the beautiful set, Maliny. 🙂
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Beautiful !!!
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Haiku leaves me confused but yours left me inspired 🙂
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Thanks, Prerna 🙂
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