An attempt of Ethere, a form of poetry written in ten lines, with each line accomodating the number of syllables as its line number.
A
Dash of
Blush cluster
On dimpled cheeks
His looks sensuous
Bated breath loquacious
Of bait, his defiant charm;
Breeze sultry, sprinkling pearly drop
On chiseled face, it trickles down
Melting to specks beneath sauve gliding touch.
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Another one :
Books
They smell
Of dust speckle
Engraved grey
Amidst tangled words
In its swooping sly waft
Hauled into mystic depths
Of love, truth, fear and fantasy,
The many resplendent emotions
I succumb to lure – my retribution.
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Lovely one
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Writing is a tough art and more tough when it comes to write under certain specific parameters. Good job.
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I agree with Deepak.
It is hard for me.
Well written by you.
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A very creative attempt towards uniqueness in ur pennings…thanks for sharing
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That's a different genre of poetry with different parameters. Done nicely.
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Awesome Maliny! This form of poetry looks interesting…very well done!
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Wow … I loved the form of this poetry … indeed challenging, but you made it look so easy !!!
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Seems such a easy flow to read that it hides the challenge of composing such a verse… Loved both attempts, the one about books is simply fabulous!!
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Good attempt
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Nice experiment.
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Tough one but good . keep writing and sharing .
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Wonderful attempt 🙂 Just simply awesome Maliny 🙂 keep it up!!
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Thankyou 🙂
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It was tough, but then attempting a challenge is the best way to flush out write's block ! Thankyou for reading it Deepak 🙂
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Thanks so much Indrani for the visit and for the comment 🙂
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Thank you Arish 🙂 Loved your poems . Had commented on your latest post and has started following your post as well !
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Thank you 🙂
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Hey thanks Bushra . Back here after long . Thank you for the good words 🙂
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Does look simple isnt it ? I did rack my mind for sometime before coming up with this one 🙂 The haiku frenzy was of some help tackling the syllable rule . .
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Thanks Reshma . I look forward to your comments always 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Hey thank you so much Vishal . .
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Thanks Saurabh 🙂
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It is new form to me and quite challenging one at that. You wrote it so well.
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This is such a challengimg form and you've managed it so beautifully. Such ideas, such thoughts…. And such understated elegance in the words chosen… Awesomely done Maliny!
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Interesting form!! You've done it smartly & beautifully!:)
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lovely
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This is amazing! I lovedddd the second one more–beautifully penned, Maliny!
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Its very tough !
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form of poetry a bit of hard work with a good effort its looks cool& amazing..Maliny smiles:))GOD<3U
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